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Scorpio



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PostSubject: How was it?   Fri May 30, 2008 6:29 am

This week was my second ever rp as Milana... first one over 500 words... so how do you think it was?

What was good... what was bad... what would you do to change/make it better?
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PostSubject: Re: How was it?   Wed Jun 04, 2008 11:09 pm

TBH, I loved it.

Reading RP's like that is fun and a good read.

What was good was you wrote like a novel, I love that.

What was bad was not enough trash talking, I love trash talking.

To make it better, make more feedback from her past so you can introduce your charcter abit more better, other than that, great work.

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PostSubject: Re: How was it?   Thu Jun 05, 2008 12:37 am

Dave Johnson wrote:
TBH, I loved it.

Reading RP's like that is fun and a good read.

What was good was you wrote like a novel, I love that.

What was bad was not enough trash talking, I love trash talking.

To make it better, make more feedback from her past so you can introduce your charcter abit more better, other than that, great work.

Heh... I wont be using Milana again unless I have to... but why would she trash talk her opponent when shopping with friends?
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PostSubject: Re: How was it?   Thu Jun 05, 2008 12:57 am

Persoanally when I read people when they trash talk, people make funny quotes such as 'I'm am so much better then bla bla bla' and shit like that.

You know how some people do trash talking by pulling somethin out of his/her ass and not say it logically? Probably don't, thats just me though.

Great RP though, and I know you don't use her often, and won't be here for awhile I would guess.

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PostSubject: Re: How was it?   Thu Jun 05, 2008 1:22 am

Why won't I be here for a while?
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PostSubject: Re: How was it?   Thu Jun 05, 2008 4:13 pm

Lol I meant th character Milana won't be in a match in awhile unless something comes up.

You will be here until I die!

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PostSubject: Re: How was it?   Fri Jun 06, 2008 1:03 am

*Kills Dave*

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